The graph below shows annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industry in Somecountry.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 wards.
The bar chart compares the amounts of ground water and water supplied by public used in various industries.
It can be clearly seen that the lowest rate of usage ground water was recorded in machinery industry, 10 millions of cubic meters. The higher usage of ground water was in fuel, textiles and food/drinks industries: 70,80 and 100 millions of cubic meters, respectively. The greatest value of annual water usage was shown in chemicals (430 million cubic meters)industry and almost half less in metal and paper industries 240 and 190 cubic meters, respectively.
In comparison with water supplied by public the smallest annual usage rate had fuel, textiles and paper industries, between 10 and 20 million cubic meters. Machinery and metal were supplied with 90-100 million cubic meters water by public. The peak value was recorded for chemical and food/drinks industries, 240 and 190 million cubic meters of water supplied by public.
In conclusion, the report shows that two dominant industries in annual ground water usage are chemicals and metal. However, twice as much chemical industry used ground water as metal industry. Public supplied with water mostly chemistry and food/drink industries. In short the biggest demand of water was in chemistry industry.
The graph below shows annual water usage (in millions of cubic meters) by industry in Somecountry.
Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 wards.
The bar chart compares the amounts of ground water and water supplied by public used in various industries.
It can be clearly seen that the lowest rate of usage ground water was recorded in machinery industry, 10 millions of cubic meters. The higher usage of ground water was in fuel, textiles and food/drinks industries: 70,80 and 100 millions of cubic meters, respectively. The greatest value of annual water usage was shown in chemicals (430 million cubic meters)industry and almost half less in metal and paper industries 240 and 190 cubic meters, respectively.
In comparison with water supplied by public the smallest annual usage rate had fuel, textiles and paper industries, between 10 and 20 million cubic meters. Machinery and metal were supplied with 90-100 million cubic meters water by public. The peak value was recorded for chemical and food/drinks industries, 240 and 190 million cubic meters of water supplied by public.
In conclusion, the report shows that two dominant industries in annual ground water usage are chemicals and metal. However, twice as much chemical industry used ground water as metal industry. Public supplied with water mostly chemistry and food/drink industries. In short the biggest demand of water was in chemistry industry.
The bar chart compares the amounts of ground water and water supplied by public used in various industries.
It can be clearly seen that the lowest rate of usage ground water, 10 millions of cubic meters(1), was recorded in the (2)machinery industry. The higher usage of ground water was in fuel, textiles and food/drinks industries: 70,80 and 100 millions of cubic meters, respectively.(3) The greatest value of annual water usage was shown in chemicals (430 million cubic meters)industry and almost a (4) half less in metal and paper industries 240 and 190 cubic meters, respectively.
In comparison with water supplied by public the smallest annual usage rate had fuel, textiles and paper industries, between 10 and 20 million cubic meters. Machinery and metal were supplied with 90-100 million cubic meters water by public. The peak value was recorded for chemical and food/drinks industries, 240 and 190 million cubic meters of water supplied by public.
In conclusion, the report shows that two dominant industries in annual ground water usage are chemicals and metal. However, twice as much chemical industry used ground water as metal industry. Public supplied with water mostly chemistry and food/drink industries. In short the biggest demand of water was in chemistry industry. The bar chart compares the amounts of ground water and water supplied by public used in various industries.
It can be clearly seen that the lowest rate of usage ground water was recorded in machinery industry, 10 millions of cubic meters. The higher usage of ground water was in fuel, textiles and food/drinks industries: 70,80 and 100 millions of cubic meters, respectively. The greatest value of annual water usage was shown in chemical industry(430 million cubic meters) and almost a half less in metal and paper industries: 240 and 190 cubic meters, respectively.
In comparison with water supplied by public,(5) the smallest annual usage rate had fuel, textiles and paper industries, between 10 and 20 million cubic meters. Machinery and metal were supplied with 90-100 million cubic meters water by public. The peak value was recorded for chemical and food/drinks industries, 240 and 190 million cubic meters of water supplied by public.
In conclusion, the report shows that two dominant industries in the annual ground water usage are chemicals and metal. However, twice as much chemical industry as metal industry used ground water(6) . Public supplied with water mostly chemistry and food/drink industries. In short,(7) the biggest demand of water was in the chemical(8) industry.
1. Lepiej, jeśli tą konkretną liczbę wstawimy zaraz po ogólnej informacji zamiast na końcu zdania.
2. Brak przyimka.
3. Tutaj te informacje są poprawnie przekazane :)
4. Brak przyimka.
5. Brak przecinka.
6. Proszę zwrócić uwagę na szyk zdania.
7. Brak przecinka.
8. Bądźmy konsekwentni: przemysł chemiczny to chemical industry:)
Dobra praca, coraz lepiej idzie Pani to opisywanie grafów :D
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