Writing - Asking for help
Hi Tom! I want to apologise you I write so early. I need your help with shopping. I want to buy a pair of shoes.I need to buy them as soon as it is possible because my old shoes have many holes. . Can we go there today at 1 p.m. ? I will come to your house. Please write to me when you read this message. Peter
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Writing - Asking for help
Hi Tom! I want to apologise you I write so early. I need your help with shopping. I want to buy a pair of shoes.I need to buy them as soon as it is possible because my old shoes have many holes. . Can we go there today at 1 p.m. ? I will come to your house. Please write to me when you read this message. Peter
1.I want to apologise you I write so early. -> I want to apologise to you for writing so early.
Istnieje taka forma, która warto zapamiętać: "to apologise to somebody for (doing) sth"
2. I need to buy them as soon as it is possible... -> I need to buy them as soon as possible
Najszybciej jak to możliwe "as soon as possible" bez "it"
1. I am sorry for writing so early, but I really need your help with the shopping.
/\ apologize chyba bardziej formalnie i lepiej połączyć to w jedno zdanie - ładniej brzmi
2. to as soon as it is possible jest według mnie dobre. gdzieś słyszałem 'do is as gently, as it is possible' więc tutat 'it' raczej podkreśla dalszą część zdania chyba.
3. Can we go there zmieniłbym na How about we went there
4. za krótkie zdania raczej robisz, lepiej je łączyć.
5. 'when' raczej zastąpić 'as soon as you read'
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