It is opinion that television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting pople or talking with our family we just watch television.
In fact, nowadays almost all families have a TV, sometimes, I think probably more than one. They spend hours watching it.But I know about some pepople choose to live without a TV because they think that is better.
In my opinion there are both advantages and disadvantages of it.
Firstly, when families spend more time with TV they can not talk to each other or doing more creative thing like reading, painting,knitting and et. al.
Secondly, they do not spend any time outdors, and are not usually keep fit.
The researches say that it is a huge healthier problem all over the Western World.
Thirdly, people do not think about it, but the TV easily shape their out look on different parts of life, e.g. politics, homelessness, unemployment, domestic violence, the icrease in crime, environmental issues and other.
On the other hand, children who do not watch TV may feel different from their school friends, often will know what they are talking about.
Also, I think, all TV programmes are not bad. There are very good schol broadcasting, historic, documentary too.
I convinced that TV is a great source of entertainment. People want to escape from terrible troubles. A good programme can make them happy.
To summ up, I think today it is unrealistic and I and other people should just try to turn the TV set off when there is nothing good on.
It is opinion that television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting pople or talking with our family we just watch television.
In fact, nowadays almost all families have a TV, sometimes, I think probably more than one. They spend hours watching it.But I know about some pepople choose to live without a TV because they think that is better.
In my opinion there are both advantages and disadvantages of it.
Firstly, when families spend more time with TV they can not talk to each other or doing more creative thing like reading, painting,knitting and et. al.
Secondly, they do not spend any time outdors, and are not usually keep fit.
The researches say that it is a huge healthier problem all over the Western World.
Thirdly, people do not think about it, but the TV easily shape their out look on different parts of life, e.g. politics, homelessness, unemployment, domestic violence, the icrease in crime, environmental issues and other.
On the other hand, children who do not watch TV may feel different from their school friends, often will know what they are talking about.
Also, I think, all TV programmes are not bad. There are very good schol broadcasting, historic, documentary too.
I convinced that TV is a great source of entertainment. People want to escape from terrible troubles. A good programme can make them happy.
To summ up, I think today it is unrealistic and I and other people should just try to turn the TV set off when there is nothing good on.
This is an opinion that television is dangerous because it destroys family life and any sense of community; instead of visiting people or talking with our family, we just watch television.
In fact, nowadays almost all families have a TV (set), sometimes, I think, probably more than one. They spend hours watching it.But I know that some pepople choose to live without a TV because they think that is better.
In my opinion, there are both advantages and disadvantages of it.
Firstly, when families spend more time watching TV, they can not talk to each other or do(1) more creative things like reading, painting,knitting etc.
Secondly, they do not spend any time outdoors and do not usually keep fit/and therefore are not fit.
The researches say that people from the Western World have a huge problem with health. (2)
Thirdly, people do not think about it, but the TV easily shapes their opinions(3) on different parts of the life, e.g. politics, homelessness, unemployment, domestic violence, the icrease in crime, environmental issues and other.
On the other hand, children who do not watch TV may feel different from their school friends, because they will not know what they are talking about.
Also, I think that not all the TV programmes are bad. There are very good educational broadcasts, for example historic and documentary films (4).
I am convinced that TV is a great source of entertainment. People want to escape from terrible troubles. A good programme can make them happy.
To sum up, I think that today it is unrealistic and I and other people should just try to turn the TV set off when there is nothing good on.
1. The cannot talk, they cannot do (skoro can odnosi się do tych dwóch czasowników, to ich forma też musi być taka sama).
2. Wydaje mi się, że to zdanie brzmi lepiej i że o to Pani chodziło.
3. Outlook to dobre słowo, jednak nie kolokuje się z czasownikiem "to shape". Można tylko "shape sb's opinion"
4. Troche tu pozmieniałam. Proszę szczególnie zwrócić uwagę na educational zamiast school programmes.
Jest to naprawdę świetne wypracowanie. Ciekawe argumenty, wszystko poparte przykładami, bogate słownictwo i super konstrukcja (spójnie i poprawnie uzywa Pani łączników). Ciągle się jednak będę czepiać tego, żeby Pani krytycznym okiem jeszcze raz na świeżo zawsze przeczytała swoje wypociny:) Uniknie Pani w ten sposób wielu błędów.
alimar - Proszę mnie nie oszczędzać. Ja to sobie wszystko dokładnie analizuję. Tyle że wiedza jest jeszcze nie uleżana i ciągle powtarzam te same błedy, ale świadomość, że mogę na Panią liczyć co do sprawdzania prac zachęca mnie do pisania kolejnych. Trochę słodko wyszło, hi, hi :)
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a.toronczak - Może ta świadomość nie jest za dobra, bo bardziej liczy Pani na mnie niż na siebie ;) A skoro mamy dzień słodzenia, to też napiszę coś dobrego: naprawdę dobrze sobie Pani radzi! Może sprawić sobie Pani nagrodę za wytrwałość i upór w nauce :)
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