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Miałam napisać na lekcję angielskiego swoją biografię i jestem pewna, że zropiłam taz z tuzin błędów... Możecie mi to jakoś sprawdzić i "powytykać" błędy, że tak powiem?
I was born in Slubice on 29 may 1999. My parents are musician, grandma is an opera singer and my grandpa is arhitect and painter. My sister was twelwe years old then. When I was 3 years old I satrted go to kindergarten in Frankfurt, but when I was 4 years old my parents changed it. Then I started going to Polish kindergarten.I won a couple of competentions. When I was 7 years old I started go to shool. From this time I can't find real friends, but here was musicschool too. In the musicschool I found real friends and I really enjoyed it. When I was in fourth class I became a president of student government. Thrn I sang my first solo part in childrens opera "Noye's Fludde". At the beginning of fifth class I joined choir "Adoramus" In half of fifth class I sang my second solo part in next children opera "Brundibar".This year I had third and second places on 2 piano competentions. My sister is a violinist and she graduate Chopin's University in Warsaw; and soon I'll become an aunt.
Bardzo proszę o jak najszybszą pomoc!
Miałam napisać na lekcję angielskiego swoją biografię i jestem pewna, że zropiłam taz z tuzin błędów... Możecie mi to jakoś sprawdzić i "powytykać" błędy, że tak powiem?
I was born in Slubice on 29 may 1999. My parents are musician, grandma is an opera singer and my grandpa is arhitect and painter. My sister was twelwe years old then. When I was 3 years old I satrted go to kindergarten in Frankfurt, but when I was 4 years old my parents changed it. Then I started going to Polish kindergarten.I won a couple of competentions. When I was 7 years old I started go to shool. From this time I can't find real friends, but here was musicschool too. In the musicschool I found real friends and I really enjoyed it. When I was in fourth class I became a president of student government. Thrn I sang my first solo part in childrens opera "Noye's Fludde". At the beginning of fifth class I joined choir "Adoramus" In half of fifth class I sang my second solo part in next children opera "Brundibar".This year I had third and second places on 2 piano competentions. My sister is a violinist and she graduate Chopin's University in Warsaw; and soon I'll become an aunt.
Akurat mam teraz w pracy przerwę i jak zostałem już wywołany,
to nie ma sprawy :)
I was born in Slubice on 29 May 1999./1/ My parents are musicians /2/,
grandma is an opera singer and my grandpa is an architect and a painter./3/
My sister was twelve years old then. When I was 3 years old I started going to kindergarten in Frankfurt, but when I was 4 years old my parents changed it. Then I started going to Polish kindergarten. I won a couple of competentions. When I was 7 years old I started going to school. From this time I can't find real friends, but there was a music school, too. In the music school I found real friends and I really enjoyed it. When I was in the fourth/4/ class I became a president of student government. Then I sang my first solo part in childrens opera "Noye's Fludde". At the beginning of the fifth class I joined choir "Adoramus" In half of the fifth class I sang my second solo part in next children opera "Brundibar".This year I had the third and second places on the second piano competention. My sister is a violinist and she graduated from the Chopin's University in Warsaw.
Soon I'll become an aunt.
1/Nazwy miesięcy piszemy z dużej litery.
2/Rodzice są.. /l.mn./ i dlatego -musicians-.
3/Dodałem przedimki.
4/Przed -fourth- wstawiamy przedimek określony -the-
5/Wyszły typowe literówki w wyrazach -started-, -school-, -then-,-architect-
-twelve-
6/Coś tam jeszcze troszeczkę pozmieniałem.
Ale praca jest napisana bardzo dobrze i tylko pogratulować.
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