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11 lat temuostatnia aktywność: 11 lat temu
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O, come on, I'm not so old. I'm not in a hurry with maridge :) Cooking and cleaning aren't so important in maridge life. The most important thing in maridge is sharing life. The goal of maridge is to share everything and supporting each other. This the reeson why I would like someday get maridge. I would like to share with somebody my whole life, I woud like to give somebody something and get from somebody something. Of course in the future I would like to have children and build them real home and give the a lot of love. Then my children will be happy. I would like to have beautiful wife with good heart. I will talk to her, argue, have sex, travel, cook and clean.
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kulasdominik7

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Przede wszystkim: małżeństwo - marriage

I kilka literówek w kilku zdaniach:
I would like to give somebody something
...and give them a lot of love.
...beautiful wife with a good heart.

Poza tym wygląda w porządku.

pozdrawiam.
tomasso45

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This is the reason...
and build for them...
i inaczej ostatnie zdanie bo jest w nim wszystko milosc z mopem :)pomysl nad tym
ewelcia79

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I am not in a hurry to marry anyone.

Cooking and cleaning aren't so important in married life.

... to share everything and support each other.

These are the reasons why I would like to get married someday.

I would like to share my whole life with somebody, .... and get something in return.
ssunnydayss1

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