piszę email do mojej firmy i chętnie usłyszę wasze zdanie

Piszę list do mojej firmy i chętnie usłyszę wasze zdanie na temat zwrotów, które używam, gramatyki itd. Chodzi o to, że dostałem propozycję pracy od innej firmy, a moja zaproponowała mi więcej pieniążków, na co się zgodziłem. Chodzi jednak o to, że chciałbym także awansować, co będzie z pożytkiem dla firmy tym bardziej, że właśnie odchodzi mój szef. tak to sformułowałem: I would like to thank you for the offer of increase my salary by £???. I think that my work at ??? will be very beneficial. After ??? leaving our company I will be (in my opinion) the only force for innovation here. As you know IT industry is always changing and recently we could read a lot of news about Adobe and Flash. Because our company stay on Flash it will be a disaster for us when people stop using this technology. Although Flash is still used by many old computers it is not used by many new devices. In the future number of devices not using Flash will increase. I think I am now your best PHP programmer. I also use new technologies like HTML5, CSS3 and JQuery. At the moment I am just a programmer and I cannot make any decision. It will be very beneficial for the company if you promote me. That way I will be able not only do good job for our product but also teach others these new technologies. I have to say that at the moment I am afraid of the future of the company. It seems that everybody is happy about what they are doing everyday and do not want to change anything or learn new things. It is recipe for disaster. I of course understand that our main product is Flash and it will be for some time. But the same time I want our company to progress and be ready for changes occurring now and in the future. Kindly regards nie mam za dużo doświadczenia w pisaniu takich oficjalnych listów i chciałbym aby ten dobrze wypadł dlatego **proszę o wszelką krytykę**